Sierra Lancaster knew the path she wanted to take in life. After a couple of incidents, her path changes and becomes more dangerous. She loves her job though. Sierra's partner, Colton, is a terrific guy and a great friend. When their boss sends them on vacation, they don't expect the bottom to fall out of their world. Now, they'll have to cope with new information and old.
The base story line of this book is a good one. It has some unexpected twists and turns which only enhance the story. However...
I did find issues. This book reads awkwardly. Incomplete sentences don't help this read. It's out of sequence in several spots. There are sections which are repeated in several places. It's as if Ms. Tyree went back in and began to redo a section but forgot to delete the previous section. Ms. Tyree gives up too many of the surprises too early in the story. This messes up the flow of the read. It's almost like this was written by a junior high student. Clumsy comments and things explained that didn't need explaining. This book is NOT ready for readers. It requires some reworking before they allow the public to read it.
I gave this one 2 cheers out of 5 because it's a nice attempt but falls short of the goal.
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